Speaking to inform: Discussing complex ideas with clear explanations and dynamic slides, week(1-5) All Quiz Answers with Assignments.

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 Speaking to inform: Discussing complex ideas with clear explanations and dynamic slides





Week 2 :

PROMPT

Invention: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's invention.

Did the speaker:

  • address points appropriate for the topic and the audience?
  • include main points and subpoints that worked together well?
  • include appropriate and varied evidence that strengthened the explanation?

5/5 The main point of the speech was how giant sea creatures eat tiny sea creatures (title).The speaker uses subpoints including how the research was conducted, the prediction of the finding, the actual findings, and finally the conclusion. They predicted that the population of small sea creatures would be directly related to the population of giant sea creatures, but were wrong. The research shows that the population density of tiny sea creatures will attract a larger population of giant sea creatures. The flow of the subpoints were very well constructed an organized and greatly supported the main point.


PROMPT

Arrangement: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's arrangement.

Did the speaker:

  • arrange the speech in a clear and logical manner?
  • time the main points appropriately?
  • perform the arrangement in a clear and engaging way?

5/5 The discussion of the subpoints, leading to the main point, were very concise and orderly. The speaker did a great job of transitioning from one point to the next, there was no confusion on the extent of the subpoint she was explaining.


PROMPT

Style: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's style.

Did the speaker:

  • include clear and visually striking presentation slides and presented them effectively?
  • balance breadth and depth well in discussion of the topic?
  • perform ethos effectively, demonstrating both a mastery of, and a passion for, the topic?

4/5 The speaker went deep enough in information for the audience have a fundamental understanding the topic. Also, the speaker kept breadth to a minimum, but suffice enough to hit the main points. The presentation was very simple but impactful. I believe a deeper demonstration of passion could have been accomplished by stating, why the research was important, or her personal justification for the research.


PROMPT

Memory and delivery: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's delivery.

Did the speaker:

  • break up the presentation into appropriate and discrete chunks?
  • use notes and cited sources effectively and appropriately?
  • breathe and project appropriately and effectively?
  • perform pitch and rate appropriately and effectively?
  • move and gesture appropriately and effectively?
  • interact with the space dynamically?

4/5 The speaker use an appropriate amount of hand movement throughout the speech. She also used adequate voice pitch and rate. The speaker also, walked back and forth creating a sense of dimension during the presentation.


PROMPT

Recommendations: In the space below, identify and describe 1-3 recommendations for speaker's improvement and/or revisions.

This was a great speech in my opinion. The only thing I would add is a justification for the research itself, or what the new found information will be used for. This will display passion, create curiosity, and generate interest.




Week 4 :


PROMPT Invention: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's invention. Did the speaker: address points appropriate for the topic and the audience? include main points and subpoints that worked together well? include appropriate and varied evidence that strengthened the explanation?

5 /5 

T he speaker addressed points appropriately that related to Obligopoly, the topic that he wants to talk about. The sub-points are relevant with appropriate explanations and support. Examples are includes e.g industries to visaulise the theretical frameworks

PROMPT Arrangement: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's arrangement. Did the speaker: arrange the speech in a clear and logical manner? time the main points appropriately? perform the arrangement in a clear and engaging way? 5/5 The 3 subpoints flow logically and naturally like how do oligopoly forms naturally in a competitive market, then move on to various types of it and ways to analyse it, then end up with a comparison between it and cartel. The speaker arrange them in a clear and informative way. Time allocation is fair for each point. 


PROMPT Style: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's style. Did the speaker: include clear and visually striking presentation slides and presented them effectively? balance breadth and depth well in discussion of the topic? perform ethos effectively, demonstrating both a mastery of, and a passion for, the topic? 4/5 The speaker projects the speech in a very clear and conversational way, with proper breadth and depth in discussion of the topic. The speaker definitely shows his mastery towards this economic topic but perhaps his passion could be strengthened a bit more. 


PROMPT Memory and delivery: In the blank below, please provide a rank (5/excellent; 4/good; 3/adequate; 2/Flawed; 1/Poor/Missing) and 2-6 sentences of feedback about the speaker's delivery. Did the speaker: break up the presentation into appropriate and discrete chunks? use notes and cited sources effectively and appropriately? breathe and project appropriately and effectively? perform pitch and rate appropriately and effectively? move and gesture appropriately and effectively? interact with the space dynamically? 3/5 The breaks between each sub-points should be enhanced to allow audience to digest the topic esp for those who don't know econs at all. Overall, the pitch is authoritative and profession but if he could interact with the space a bit more with varied tone / pitch of projection, he could make the present more lively. 


PROMPT Recommendations: In the space below, identify and describe 1-3 recommendations for speaker's improvement and/or revisions. - nice opening: love the idea how he first defines oligopoly so general public can get the idea of what it is. - try breaking the present into discrete chunks by introducing breaks, movements/ gestures to signify the audience about transition of main points. - varied pitch and rate to project more passion into the presentation. 


Week 5 Assignment 1:


PROMPT

Submit your saved speech file here. If you upload a file here, don't provide a link below.



PROMPT

If you've uploaded your speech to YouTube or another video server, submit the link here.


Week 5 Assignment 2:


PROMPT

Submit your manuscript here.


The objective for putting these words down is to amend readers opinion anticipating that hardly any of my words will bring alterations to there views. We heard about it "Words can make you, words can break you and words can transform you into the best version of yours." We don't even contemplate our words prior to utterance. We suspect ourselves to be the supreme and also flawless. Yes,,,& Arrogantly we calls it Self Reliance Yeah we believe we recognise more But It is of no worth unfortunately it is simply of no worth, if your so called self reliance 'can shatter the confidence of others your self-trust is all in vain. I light upon an instance few days back in a Hospital where I was doing my Internship. A prepossessing young lady had a love marriage unfortunately in first few months she get divorced on account of some minuscule misapprehensions. It is heart rendering for a women to reside by herself after being married as our society simply don't accept the fact that they may face adjustment issues and get separated, they think. of it as reason of love marriage same take places with her. She was trying to move ahead in her life so she started living with her family. Her Brother's Wife started torturing you are faulty, you are not a good being these words simply pauperized her existence.She was absolutely exhausted. Contended smiling face of that girl was now transformed into a disordered soul suffering with Obsessive Compulsive disorder. _(A disorder in which people have recurring, unwanted thoughts that make them feel driven to do something repetitively)_ She lay hold of those words sedately & started believing she had those *'Gandi cheentain' on her body she begin brushing inside of her mouth with soups literally her face was all demolished just because of someone's words she was simply devastated & unfortunately lost control over her senses. Ahhh I genuinely don't want to share it but I suspect "Everyone you meet is fighting a battle you know nothing about it, so Be Kind" Some of us might feel that intensity of pain she was suffering with. She simply lost control over her consciousness and believe her body to be grubby all the day. I plea you all to think twice and thrice before uttering anything if you guys can't change someone's life please don't shatter it. Few of our words for us can Completely destroy someone's life. Try to be a ray of light in darkness instead of darkning their worlds. Try to be empathetic.We can't modify the world but we can alter ourselves so that we will realize the pain of others instead of becoming reason of it.





























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